Critique Notes

Redesign of bed_need more delicate posts, consider color (not enough contrast on black), also perspective is skewed. A lot of attention needs to be put on this because it is essentially a character. Snowy scene...bed covered in snow?

Winter_hill too stark, don't like line that make the shape. Change to paper texture in very slight grey tones. Consider including some dead foliage, stumps, etc.

Canopy_generally successful

Doesn't look like shes in bed in the waking up scene...looks like shes standing in front of a gate. Pan out more from that scene to see her in bed.

Character design_think about making changes in hair, etc. Bow also, should it be outlined?

To Do:

Make all above changes.

Begin to animate. Would really really like to have a good chunk done for review.